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1, In 2019, the Second National Youth Games will be host in Shanxi. This is good. Sports can help me to become healthy. In other to this games, we prepared something.
2. In 2019, The Second National Youth Games will be held in SHANXI CHINA. Shan xi also has some new change in 2019.
3, Hello, everyone! The Second National Youth Games is hold in Shanxi It is all Shanxi’s people pride and I am also pound of this. Let’s we know some informations about it together.
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Sports:
1, the Fitness Day will coming.
2, They have Fitness Day to keep people health.
3, we have Fitness Day, it is a good festival to people. It can improve people’s exercise active and make people’s body more strong.
4, Shanxi will marathon in September. It also sat up plenty of sports centers
Public sports facilities
1, Shanxi build more free public parks. When people feel boring, you can go to the parks to play.
2, More and more free public parks are appeared.
Environment:
1,Street became more and more clean and more and more tidy.
2.There have many places of interest.
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The ending.
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注: 1, 应连词成句。
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4，段落层次分明，有条理，逻辑通顺。
5，书写干净整洁，清晰（否则从总分中扣去1-2分）
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