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人教2003课标版《Using LanguageⅠ》教案优质课下载
Step 1:
16高考例析
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
show students’ writing on screen
Neat ones and not neat ones to stress neat writing matters a lot
Step2: content
A. Beginning: simple introduction to yourself and your writing purpose
compare some of students’ beginning part and choose a proper one
1.I am Li Hua, writing to you to hope you can offer me help.
2.In this summer holiday, i 'd like to work in a a foreign company.
3.A long time has passed since we met last time. Does everything go well? I plan to take a part-time job in a company, which needs a personal resume, therefore, i am writing this letter to ask for your help.
4. I am Li Hua, one of your student. I am writing this letter to ask for your help with my application and resume.
Suggested one: I’m Li Hua, one of your Chinese student when you were teaching here in our school last year. I’m writing to ask a favor of you.（必要的介绍和引入，交代写信目的）
B. Body part: accurate and well-organized
Enjoy some fluent sentences
1.During the summer holiday, I intend to apply for a part-time job in a foreign company, through which i can build up my abilities and enrich experience. (夏萌）
2.Not only can it help me improve my English, but also enrich my experience.(成鑫）
3. I have a lot of time available this summer holiday. An idea occurred to me that I can take a part-time job in a foreign company.(熊一)
4. What concerns me first is the languages I used in it. (王鹏）
5. Besides, the format of my resume is also what puzzles me.( 安琪）
6. I am not quite sure whether the languages in my application is proper.(大成）
7.Would you like to help me with the words and format of my resume attached to the E-mail?(熊一）
8. Would you please have a look at the format of my resume at your convenience ? I would appreciate it .(慧娟）