《Writing》公开课教案下载

《Writing》公开课教案优质课下载

Step 2 让学生分析好的戏剧性故事的要素（A good dramatic story is just like a good movie. There are pictures ,sounds and smells in it）

Step3 引导学生如何写好戏剧性故事的开头

首先，介绍一些当代小说如《无声告白》的开头（Lydia?is?dead.?But?they don’t know this yet. ）以及一些经典小说比如《傲慢与偏见》的开头（It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife. ）让学生自己总结好的开头需具备哪些要素。

然后，给学生展示一张2016叙事性摄影获奖图片以及一张他们自己的生活照，让他们让根据提示，展开想象，补充上适当的形容词，副词，完成故事的开头。

Step 4 引导学生如何写好戏剧性故事的结尾

首先，给学生展示四本经典名著以及四个经典结尾，让学生进行匹配，并体会好的结尾的特点

然后 给学生展示一张刘老师在海边的照片，给出三种结尾让学生判断哪种结尾更能在读者心中留下深刻的印象。

接着，向学生展示上海高考看图作文题，让学生根据图片纂写一个好的故事的结尾。

Step5 引导学生如何安排一个好的故事情节。

根据图片，提供三个版本的故事，让学生自主选择哪个版本的故事情节最吸引人。

Version 1：Once, there was a young girl . To celebrate the coming of Christmas , she cut her hair. Her husband liked her new hairstyle very much and they had a sweet Christmas .

Version 2: Once, there was a young girl who sold her most important possession--her hair to buy her husband a gift for Christmas , but she burst into tears when she unwrapped the gift given by her husband. It’s a beautiful comb.

Version 3 : Della wants to buy Jim, her husband ,a gift for Christmas , but she has little money . So she sells her most important possession--her hair , and buys an elegant watch chain for Jim . On Christmas Day , Jim shows his gift for Della , Della opens the box and cries out in joy , only to burst into tears immediately afterward . Jim has given her the set of fancy combs she's wanted for ages , but only now she has no hair for them..Then she shows Jim the watch chain . Jim smiles , falling back on the couch . He sold his watch to buy Della's combs , he explains. He recommends they put away their presents and have dinner .

由学生自己总结要写出引人入胜的情节，需注意什么地方。

课堂练习：

Task 1 给出一些戏剧性故事的开头和结尾，让学生进行匹配

Task 2 给出一个故事的开头，让学生续写故事。

教学反思：

My students’ creative writings have really amazed me. To tell the truth, I seldom give them chances to write so freely in my daily English writing classes which are usually examination-oriented. I hope after this class ,they will find fun in reading and writing rather than consider it a burden . I should also be careful in my future teaching so as not to become the killer of their imagination.