There is a letter “M” in it. “M” is for the Million things she gave me. The letter “O” means that she’s growing Old. The next letter is “T”. “T” is for the Tears she brought me up. And then is “H”. “H” is for her Heart as warm as spring. The letter “E “ also in the word. “E” is for her Eyes, with the love-light Shining. The last letter is “R”. “R” means Right, she’ll be Right here for me. Put them all together, they spell “MOTHER”.

It’s the most beautiful word in my mind.

Questions: 1. What do you think of the composition ?

2. Do you want to make your own composition like it ?

Lead to the topic: This class , we will discuss how to beautify our composition.

Step 2. PART TWO 自主学习

Read two compositions, choose the best.

Group- work: Discuss with group members, why do we think the second composition is better?

Find the Bright Points 找亮点

Ss show their opines. (固定搭配set phrases; 关联词 associated words; 合理的篇章布reasonable layout; 多样的句式different sentence structures; 谚语合理使用saying; 书写优美beautiful handwriting ; 思想thoughts)

According to theses bright points, do some exercises.

Step 3: PART THREE 合作运用

Group work:与小组成员一起, 运用归纳优秀作文亮点，运用写作技巧，美化作文--- 给母亲的一封信。！

Dear mom,

Mother's Day is coming. I want to show my thanks to you. Every day, you get up early. You prepare breakfast for me. I don’t worry about getting up late. I failed an exam and felt stressed. You weren't angry with me. You encourage me and cheer me up. At school I didn’t get on well with my friends. You knew it. You talked with me patiently. You made me know the real friendship was important. Now, I have grown up. I know you better. Thank you, mom. I will love you more.

Yours,

Step 4. PART FOUR 分享反馈

Show the new composition.

Explain the purpose of the changes to classmates.

Step 5. Summary

SHAPE ﹨* MERGEFORMAT

These seven bright points can help us to beautify our compositions.

Step 6. Homework

请运用今天所学的写作技巧，美化一篇近期作文。再请老师评分。看看自己美化后的作文分数是否有提高？

Handwriting

Saying

Set phrases

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教材

Unit 1 How can we become good learners?

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3b

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—3b Self check

Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1d

Section B 2a—3b Self check

Unit 3 Could you tell me where the restrooms are?

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3b

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—3b Self check

Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2f

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 6 When was it invented?

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 8 It must belong to Carla.

Section A 1a—1c

Section A 2a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1d

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1d

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 10 You are suppoed to shake hands.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1d

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 11 Sad movies made me cry.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4b

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth!

Section A 1a—1c

教材

Unit 1 How can we become good learners?

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3b

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—3b Self check

Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1d

Section B 2a—3b Self check

Unit 3 Could you tell me where the restrooms are?

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3b

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—3b Self check

Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2f

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 6 When was it invented?

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 8 It must belong to Carla.

Section A 1a—1c

Section A 2a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1d

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1d

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 10 You are suppoed to shake hands.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4c

Section B 1a—1d

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 11 Sad movies made me cry.

Section A 1a—2d

Section A 3a—3c

Section A Grammar focus 4a—4b

Section B 1a—1e

Section B 2a—2e

Section B 3a—3b Self check

Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth!

Section A 1a—1c

Section A 2a—2d

Section A 3a—3b