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Lots of waste gas is exhausted into the air.
There are many ways to pollute the air, such as the smoke from the factories and the waste gas from the cars.
We can see much smoke from the factories and the waste gas from the cars.
What should we do to protect the environment?
Decide what tense to use.(确定时态)
Catch the theme and describe the details. (抓住主题,描写细节)
Try to use some phrases, sentence patterns (运用词组、句型)
Show your own opinions.(发表观点)
Check your composition carefully and correct the mistakes.(仔细检查,修改错误)
Please follow the advice:
2017年1月上旬,全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾,陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下提示,以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80-100字的短文。
1.重要性:只有一个地球
2.主要问题:污染 分析污染的原因
3.措施:停止污染、保护大自然
4.总结:如果人人都贡献力量,
世界将会变得更加美丽。
Show your composition!
One possible version:
We all live on the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we do harm to it, it will be angry.
We can see much smoke from the factory and the waste gas from the cars. Factory pour the waste water into the river, so plenty of fish and plants die. A large number of trees are cut down. The rubbish is everywhere.
It’s our duty to protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution. We should prevent people from polluting the environment. Protecting the nature is very important.
If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.
Check your composition carefully and correct the mistakes.
天津市中考英语书面表达评分标准:
第五档:(13~15 分)能写明全部或绝大部分内容要点;语言基本无误:行文连贯,表达清楚。第四档:(10~12 分)能写明全部或大部分内容要点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。第三档:(7~9 分) 能写明大部分内容要点;语言有较多错误;尚能达意。第二档:(4~6 分) 只能写出少部分内容要点;语言错误很多,只有个别句子可读。第一档:(0~3 分) 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词。
Homework: Finish the composition on Page 73 of the workbook