1、本网站免费注册后即可以下载，点击开通VIP会员可无限免费下载！
2、资料一般为word或PPT文档。建议使用IE9以上浏览器或360、谷歌、火狐浏览器浏览本站。
3、有任何下载问题，请联系微信客服。
扫描下方二维码，添加微信客服
《Writing》公开课PPT课件优质课下载
A Letter of Asking for Help
to polish a passage with better words, phrases and sentences
Learning Aim
grading standards（得分标准）:
1. words better words﹨phrases
2. sentences better sentences
3. content the whole information
使用地道规范的词。增加形容词、副词作为修饰语。使用恰当的短语句型。
由简单句升级为复合句，如名词性从句、定语从句，或可使用倒装句或强调句等特殊句式。
内容要点齐全，层次分明，行文连贯。
Basic Practice: words and expressions
1. The 2017 College Entrance Examination is coming .
2.I am good at English,especially in terms of writing and speaking.
have a good command﹨knowledge of
is around the corner
3.Finally I knew that English is quite useful.
realized﹨was aware.
4.Next, I know how to get along well with others.
In addition﹨Besides﹨ What's more
1.I am very worried about his condition.
(升级为感叹句)
How worried I am about his condition!
2.Hardwork and determination play a vital role in shaping a great mind.
(升级为强调句(对主语强调))
It 's hardwork and determination that play a vital role in shaping a great mind.