外研2003课标版《Writing》优质课PPT课件下载

外研2003课标版《Writing》优质课PPT课件下载

Part 1 – Raise the topic

Part 2 – Give out different opinions of both

sides and their reasons.

学生作品1：

Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers. There are some reasons below.

For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students.

This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.

点评：

亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活

2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。

2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。

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1)

2)

3)

1) Compared

2) more

3) try to make the classes

lively and interesting

不足之处：

1、个别地方的表达需

要改进。

学生作品2:

Opinions are divided on this question.

Some students who like the elderly