译林2003课标版《Self-assessment》公开课PPT课件优质课下载

译林2003课标版《Self-assessment》公开课PPT课件优质课下载

3.be able to polish up their writings

Lead-in

1.What can be called a good article?

【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

2.What are the difficulties you meet in writing articles?

1).加强基础词汇和基本句子结构学习。

2).提高综合运用复合句的能力。

3).注意句子间的过渡和衔接。

4).仿写、背诵、熟读话题范文。

Comments on the writings

Strong points:

If so, we will build an environmentally friendly society.(省略句) (邢臻)

Last but not least, when riding bikes, we will feel more relaxed after the whole day’s hard work.(省略句) (邓雪怡)

Use bike-sharing, and you will find that it is useful.（祈使句+and+陈述句）(张子莹)

As far as the promoting of the bike-sharing is concerned, I think ...(活用句型) (吴雨欣)

Above are my opinions.（倒装）(吴雨欣)

I can’t be in more favor of it.（can’t...more句型）(胡慧月)

....bicycle riding is the least expensive way of traveling apart from walking.(adj最高级用于否定表达) (吕露露、程亚玮)

We are supposed to achieve a balance between development and nature.（achieve a balance between...高级词汇）(陶敏)

However, it’s our duty to protect the environment which we rely on.(it作形式主语，rely on高级词汇,复杂结构) (陶敏)

It can also build social bonds between people.(高级词汇) (陈楚乔)

This is one of the greatest invitations to traffic accidents.(高级词汇) (吕梦娟)

?Notice:

They have achieved much in advanced phrases and sentence structures. We should learn from them.

Weak points: