《Lesson 1 Language Learning》公开课PPT课件优质课下载

《Lesson 1 Language Learning》公开课PPT课件优质课下载

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That's it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.

There are 10 errors in this text.

And there are 2 errors

in a sentence at most.

2012年新课标全国卷 短文改错分析Sentence 1

I learned early in life that I had to be

more patient and little aggressive.

little改为less

1. Analysis：

并列连词and前后连接语法功能相同的平行结构

2012年新课标全国卷 短文改错分析Sentence 2

From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy.

toy改为toys

2. Analysis：名词复数形式

2012年新课标全国卷 短文改错分析Sentence 3

I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it.

did改为went或在did后加go

it改为them

3. Analysis：

固定短语go wrong

4. Analysis：

代词须与被指代的名词一致

2012年新课标全国卷 短文改错分析Sentence 4

For a while parents bought me new toys.

parents前加my