《Using LanguageⅡ》集体备课PPT课件优质课下载

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第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2016年全国卷3

Dear Bob,

I’m Li Hua. Yesterday we agreed to go to the bookstore together on Saturday but I want to tell you that I cannot go to the bookstore with you, because I have something important. I know I should keep my promise. I am very sorry about that. I hope you can understand me.

Shall we go on Sunday morning? I suggest we should start early. In this way we can have more time to read and select books. If you agree, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. You can also choose the time to go to the bookstore if you have a plan. I will be free any time after school next week. Yours

Li Hua

整篇作文缺少高级词汇、短语。句式单调，缺乏多样性，简单句的大量运用给人记流水账的感觉。

遣词造句过于平淡，叙述理由不够真诚，含糊不清以我为主体，没有顾及他人的感受。

正文第一段结尾结构松散，不够紧凑，上下文缺乏巧妙连接，表达过于口语化。部分句子不符合英式表达，如＂I hope you can understand me.＂完全是汉语思维的产物。

综上可知，语言平淡、中式英语思维、上下文缺乏连贯性是制约考生取得高分的关键因素。

策略1：特殊句式 风景独好

1 使用强调句:用do, does, did强调一般时态的谓语动词; 用it is ...that ...强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。

Those who like reading extensively say we get our knowledge through reading.

Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.

Those who like reading extensively say we do get our knowledge through reading.

举一反三

您给了我们很多的知识和快乐！(梅二检)

It is you who/that give us so much knowledge and happiness.

You do give us so much knowledge and happiness.

It is your unreserved(无保留的）?help that enables me to obtain this splendid（极好的）opportunity of further education.

2 使用倒装句

The library is to the east of the teaching building.

To the east of the teaching building is the library.

只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。

Only in this way can we learn English well.