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人教2003课标版《Using LanguageⅡ》精品PPT课件优质课下载
第五档(18-20)
语言结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富
第四档（15-17）
使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇
第三档（12-14）
应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务要求
第二档（6-11)
语法结构单调、词汇未能满足表达要求
The shortcoming of the sample passage:
语法结构和句型单调
简单句的特点：
强劲有力，干净利落，意思特别清楚。
常用来提出论点，得出结论，或提出主要事实。
句子的适当扩展不仅可以增大句子的信息量，而且可以收到一定的修饰效果。
Learning Goals
Through exercises, cooperation, questioning and comments, we will be able to:
sum up the ways and skills of improving the
language in writing and feel the benefits that they brings to us in writing.
2. use the skills consciously, properly and correctly to improve the writings.
3. be aware of our responsibility to protect our environment and learn “Practice makes perfect.”
Part 1
Last week, our class organized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating.
With high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. While we climbed the mountain, we enjoyed the beautiful views and the warm sunshine. However, we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain, because waste bottles, used packages and even banana peels were thrown everywhere, which totally ruined the beauty of the nature. What a pity it was！Feeling a great pity for the tourists, we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into 2 groups: the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones. After that, we put the rubbish into the bin differently.
We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance. Though cleaning up the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were filed with joy and never will we forget this thing.
3. 句式有变换，不单调。