描述性写作技巧点拨 |
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描述性写作技巧点拨知识点包括题目示例、构思谋篇、关键词语、连词成句、连句成篇、亮点点评等部分，有关描述性写作技巧点拨的详情如下： 题目示例请根据以下提示，以“My favourite sport”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 1．最喜欢的运动是打篮球，小时候就痴迷于篮球明星； 2．篮球运动需要迅速做出决定，因为机会稍纵即逝； 3．篮球运动需要合作，我既要明白队友的举动也要让队友知道我的需要； 4．5年的打球经历让我交到了很多朋友，我很喜欢同朋友们一起打篮球。 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：合作cooperation; 队友teammate ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 构思谋篇
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连词成句1．小时候我就痴迷于那些篮球明星，并且希望成为像他们一样的人。 I was crazy about those basketball stars and hoped to become a man like them when I was a child. 2．在篮球运动中，运动员们必须迅速做出决定。 In basketball games players must make quick decisions. 3．另一方面，我必须让我的队友们知道我需要什么。 On the other side, I must let my teammates know what I need. 4．通过这项运动我交到了很多好朋友。 I have made many good friends through this sport. 连句成篇My favourite sport Playing basketball is my favourite sport. I ①was crazy about those basketball stars and hoped to become a man like them ②when I was a child. In basketball games players must ③make quick decisions, ④because chances will disappear at once if they become a little careless. Playing basketball is a sport ⑤which also needs cooperation. No one can play basketball ⑥all by himself. During a game, I must understand ⑦what my teammates are doing. ⑧On the other side, I must let my teammates know what I need. I have played basketball for 5 years. I have made many good friends through this sport and I ⑨enjoy playing basketball with my friends. 亮点点评亮点一：文章重点介绍了篮球运动的特点，说明了作者对篮球运动的了解与喜爱。内容完整，思路清晰，用词准确，是一篇不错的范文。 亮点二：文中运用了大量的复杂句式结构，大大提升了文章的得分档次。例如，②是when 引导的时间状语从句；④是because 引导的原因状语从句，其中又包含了一个if引导的条件状语从句；⑤是which 引导的定语从句；⑦是what 引导的宾语从句等。 亮点三：一些高级短语，如①be crazy about，③make quick decisions，⑥all by himself，⑧on the other side 以及⑨enjoy doing sth. with sb. 等的准确运用，表明作者拥有丰富的词汇量。 |
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