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劝说性写作：建议信知识点包括题目示例、构思谋篇、关键词语、连词成句、连句成篇、亮点点评等部分，有关劝说性写作：建议信的详情如下： 题目示例假设你是某英文报社的编辑李华，你收到读者Mary 的一封来信。她向你询问如何交友。请根据以下提示，用英语给她写一封回信，并针对她的问题提出你的建议。 *人人都需要朋友，懂得如何交友极为重要； *对别人要友好，一个微笑就能拉近人与人之间的距离； *记住别人的名字，这样会让对方觉得自己很重要； *要关心别人，并在别人有困难时提供帮助； *与别人有分歧时，不要争吵，要商讨。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．信的格式已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：争吵quarrel Dear Mary， ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 构思谋篇
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连词成句1．一个微笑就能拉近人们彼此之间的距离。 A smile can bring people close to each other. 2．你应当关心别人，并且在别人有困难的时候尽力去帮助他们。 You should care about others and try to help others when they have difficulties. 3．你应该同其他人讨论它们，千万不要与他们争吵。 You should discuss them with others, and never quarrel with them. 4．我希望我所说的能对你有所帮助。 I hope what I have said can be helpful to you. 连句成篇Dear_Mary， I was very glad to receive your letter ①in which you asked me about how to make friends. ②Everyone needs friends, so knowing how to make friends is very important. Here is my advice. ③First, you must be friendly to others. A smile can bring people close to each other. ④Second, ⑤it is necessary to remember others' names, which will make them feel that they are important to you. ⑥Third, you should care about others and try to help others ⑦when they have difficulties. ⑧Finally, ⑨if you have different opinions, you should discuss them with others, and never quarrel with them. I hope what I have said can be helpful to you. Yours， Li_Hua 亮点点评亮点一：这是一封建议信。文章首先引出谈论的话题，然后提出具体的建议，最后表达了作者的希望。要点齐全，用词精确，语言流畅，结构严谨。 亮点二：准确而大量地使用各种复杂的句式结构是本文的最大亮点，也反映出作者具有深厚的语言功底。例如，①是一个由“介词＋which”引导的定语从句，其中又包含了“how＋动词不定式”结构作介词about的宾语；②是由连词so连接的并列句；⑤采用的是“it is＋形容词＋to do sth.”这个经典结构，其中包含了一个which 引导的非限制性定语从句；⑦为when 引导的时间状语从句；⑨为if引导的条件状语从句等。 亮点三：③First，④Second，⑥Third和⑧Finally 等连接副词的精确使用，使文章的叙述清楚而有条理，增强了文章的可读性。 |
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